On your first screenplays, avoid tackling stories beyond your ability…

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My real world advice to beginning screenwriters — do not write stories beyond your ability at this point on your journey. Ease into your epics after you gain more experience with the craft. You should be aware of your screenwriting ability and accept what you can and cannot write at this time. Humility goes a long way on this screenwriting journey. I find that too many beginning writers chase massive budget Hollywood tent-pole story ideas for their first screenplays with the hopes to compete against A-list Hollywood writers. It’s a huge waste of time and energy as the studios already have proven A-listers with box office mega hits and the credits to write the movies that we generally see in the multiplexes. All of the super hero movies are assignment jobs from ideas and franchises the studio already owns. And when 50,000 scripts bounce around Hollywood every year with only under 100 spec sales at the studio level, the odds are horrible for a spec sale.

When writing specs, I try to persuade beginning screenwriters to write something smaller in scope with regards to the story. When beginners work on their first or second screenplays, they are still learning the craft and discovering their own unique style. It takes at least four or five scripts to hit your groove and really understand your strengths and weaknesses as a screenwriter. As you’re becoming a better screenwriter by writing bad specs, making mistakes, and learning how to execute notes, you cannot focus on competing with the A-listers with scripts that are basically learning tools. Early in every screenwriter’s journey is a period where we need the time to explore our identity and ability as screenwriters. We need that precious time to learn our craft. When you begin writing at a professional level, only then will you be able to write something more challenging and stretch your abilities. Patience plus experience equals solid writing.

When starting on your first screenplays, I suggest writing more personal stories. I hate to use this cliché, but focus on character driven stories where you can really showcase your talent for creating relationships between people. Every story that you write should be driven by characters, but some stories end up being more focused on plot. Yes, structure and story are equally important, but if you can’t create memorable, complex, and unique characters that can interact, you will be lost. Showcase your talents with your passion for a story and let it show though on the page. If you’re chasing the big budget tent-pole ideas, you’ll probably be fabricating characters, tropes, and stories that feel inauthentic because they are only a rehash of other movies that you’ve seen.

If you write a story about an F.B.I. agent who deals with a serial killer, did you do research on serial killers or F.B.I. agents, bureau procedures, and how agents think and talk? Did your research include reading books or interviewing an F.B.I. agent? My point about authenticity is that without extensive research or living in the characters minds, the scripts and stories will feel inauthentic because the writer draws experiences only from other movies or TV shows the writer has seen before. This perpetuates clichés and keeps them alive.

I’m talking about spec screenplays and not assignment jobs — a completely different experience. When you work on assignment, you must please producers or executives who must please their bosses at the studio or network, or please the buyer, or the investor, and even the director must please the producer to create a commercial product on schedule and on budget. Always remember, filmmaking is a business first and millions of dollars is on the line with every project.

When writing specs, try to pick stories that can showcase the best of your writing abilities with story structure and equally as important, character development, motivation and emotion. Too many times I read specs that feel inauthentic like they are just rehashing “Hollywood” scenes that the writer only knows from movies and not from real life or experience. Inject your personal life and experiences into your stories to make them unique. If you want to say something or cause people to think, write a personal story and strive to make the emotions leap off the page. This is what will attract talent and move the script forward more than you just trying to roll the dice and hope Hollywood wants another movie about a super hero or giant monster. Again, I’m talking about specs from unknown screenwriters with no credits — and that’s most of the writers trying to break into Hollywood.

You usually get one chance to dazzle them with your script, so you must be writing at a professional level with a solid screenplay to compete. Anything less is a waste of everyone’s time so do not release your screenplay before it’s ready to compete. You also must have the patience to weather the long haul journey while you’re learning your craft and getting muddy as you slog it out in Hollywood’s trenches. This period will be filled with rejection, criticism, and failure, but it’s all part of the process. Patience and humility helps, but if you can’t accept this reality, your frustration and anger will spoil any splendid dreams of a career.

What separates those aspirants who see screenwriting as an easy way to fame and fortune from those writers who have a professional mindset? It’s a respect and humility for the difficulty of writing, the discipline to create the necessary work, and going after dreams even in the face of the incredible odds to reach any level of success. Keep true to yourself and always write with a passion for your work, but when first staring out keep it simple and don’t tackle stories beyond your ability.

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“It is no small feat to get a movie made, on any subject, on any screen.” — JJ Abrams

Do you have the patience to wait until your mud settles and the water is clear?”― Lao Tzu, Tao Te Ching

“All you need to do is write truly and not care about what the fate of it is.”—Ernest Hemingway

“No person who is enthusiastic about his work has anything to fear from life.”—Samuel Goldwyn

I don’t think of it as an art. When it works it’s skill & craft and some unconscious ability”—Ernest Lehman

“Then our writers when they have made some money increase their standard of living and they are caught. They have to write to keep up their establishments, their wives, and so on, and they write slop. It is slop not on purpose but because it is hurried. Because they write when there is nothing to say or no water in the well. Because they are ambitious. Then, once they have betrayed themselves, they justify it and you get more slop.”—Ernest Hemingway, Green Hills of Africa, page 23.

“When the last dime is gone, I’ll sit on the curb outside with a pencil and a ten cent notebook and start the whole thing over again.” — Preston Sturges

“Just do the best you can every time.  And if you’re going to stay in the movies, and you like movies—and I love them—you’d better love them a lot, because it’s going to take all of your time.  If you want to be in the movies, it’s going to break your heart.”—Richard Brooks

When you start a movie script, it’s like entering a dark room: You may find your way around all right, but you also may fall over a piece of furniture and break your neck. Some of us can see a little better than others in the dark, but there is no guaranteeing the audience’s reaction.”—Billy Wilder

Tips to survive the highs and lows of your screenwriting journey…

I always experience these emotions as I finish a new screenplay: A downhill steamroller toward the final scene, followed by a powerful feeling of accomplishment because it’s been my privilege to unleash another story upon the world. I hit a writing milestone last December having completed my twenty-fourth screenwriting assignment that was my forty-second feature screenplay written on my long haul journey. My characters have guided me through their story and now it’s over with me typing FADE OUT—THE END and turning in the first draft to the producer. We know it’s never truly over until your script is produced and the movie released, but it’s over for this draft. It may just be the first of many drafts during the rewrite process, but an accomplishment nonetheless. The creative highs help me through the writing process, and I have to bid a sad farewell to these characters — the ones I’ve known so intimately for the past 105 pages. When I finish the script’s final draft and it goes into production, the actors bring my characters to life under the clear vision of the director. That’s the time writers need to let go and watch the magical process of filmmaking as your other collaborators take over.

As I’ve mentioned before, when I finish a script, I print a hard copy, let it settle for a few days, and then go to a coffee shop with a pen and start my polish. I agonize over the structure, punctuation, characters, and dialogue throughout my first pass. I look for typos and those pesky “widow/orphan words.” My creative high still burns as fuel to get me through this first pass of the script. Many times, I’m shocked at how good the first draft reads as I figure out ways to make it better before I deliver the second draft to the producers by my contracted deadline.

The next step? Wait for notes and hopefully move onto a different project during the producer’s reading period. When the notes do come in, I finish the rewrites and turn in my final draft and that’s when I notice that my creative high begins to crash and the previous month of creative energy quickly fades. As my noisy mind grows louder, I slip into the “creative lows” and urgently need to fill my mind with new stories and more writing. I feel the overpowering need to start my next project, or I’ll slip even deeper into the creative lows — a rough place to land after a successful month of screenwriting.

When I’m not writing, I notice the creative void in my life and miss those creative highs. They can become addictive as I enjoy seeing the story unfold in my mind as if I was watching the actual movie. When I’m working on a script assignment, I’m committed to finishing it because I’ve signed a contract and have been paid to finish the job. Many times it feels like when I’m away from the script, the characters sit waiting for me to get back to the keyboard so they can move forward on their journey. Even if the idea wasn’t originally mine because it’s an assignment job, I make it mine and embrace the story as my own as I’ll need that same conviction to finish.

If I don’t immediately jump onto a new project, I find myself needing to be creative, so I start working on new ideas and pitches or treatments and outlines. The key to a stable and healthy creative mind is being aware of the creative lows and doing your best to avoid this dangerous place. The lows can make you procrastinate as fear may creep into your mind and you avoid working on your next project because you might be afraid it will not be good enough or perfect. The “writer’s fraud” syndrome could also emerge as many writers experience the feeling they only achieved their success by chance and not from their talents. Avoid this soul-sucking place by immersing yourself in works from other artists for inspiration.

You can catch up watching movies or TV series that you have always wanted to see and study. I’ve recently been on a western movie tear and have watched nearly a dozen classics of the genre. I watched a masterpiece film that was brought to my attention and its story structure was an inspiration. This film energized me to work on my old action spec that I’ve been tinkering with over the years. There is nothing quite like being inspired and energized by seeing a classic movie that makes it look so easy.

Other things you can do to fight back against the creative lows is listening to music or attending a concert, poetry reading, musical, play, art exhibit, or museum to keep your mind fresh and feed your creative soul. Try your hand at drawing or painting. Venture out and connect with like-minded people and work on their creative projects. If you have an agent or manager, have them schedule you a lunch or coffee with their other clients or professional contacts in all aspects of the film business. Soak up their knowledge and use your newfound experiences to fuel your forward momentum. Also attend workshops with professional guest speakers and catch screenings of upcoming films or become involved in local film festivals to surround yourself with creativity.

Do not underestimate the powerful inspiration that nature offers creatives. I love hiking in the mountains or taking long walks in nature and always find something to inspire me. I have been on countless hikes where I figured out a story issue or came up with a missing plot twist as a result of freeing my mind in the wild. As a screenwriter’s full life becomes a vital part of any ongoing creative journey, the process requires you to constantly take chances and push yourself out of your comfort zone. This is particularly important regarding the material you write. You’ll grow as a person and as a screenwriter if you continue to challenge yourself and experience new adventures that you can draw upon for authenticity in your work.

If you find yourself coming down from the creative highs of finishing your screenplay and slipping into the lows, do something creative. You never know where you’ll find inspiration and that’s why you should constantly expose yourself to the arts. This discipline will also help you keep a full creative well and a screenwriter’s arsenal ready for use. If you catch yourself early enough before the creative lows cloud your outlook, you’ll stay upbeat, your creative energy will flourish, and you will return to screenwriting again sooner than later.

Keep writing and keep the faith.

Scriptcat out!

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It’s a long haul journey to reach any level of screenwriting success. If your passion drives you to embark on this crazy adventure of a  screenwriting career, you’ll need to prepare for survival in Hollywood’s  trenches. Talent is important, but so is your professionalism and  ability to endure criticism, rejection, and failure over the long haul.  The odds may be stacked against you, but the way to standout in this  very competitive business is to create a solid body of work and build a  reputation as a team player and collaborator. The rest is just luck — a  prepared screenwriter who meets with an opportunity and delivers the  goods. “A Screenwriter’s Journey to Success” (2024 updated edition) will help you prepare for  your own journey with the necessary, tips, tricks and tactics that I’ve  developed over the past twenty years of working in the film industry.  It’s time to start living your dream as a screenwriter in Hollywood.

Enjoy some quotes for today… taken from my blog page QUOTE OF THE DAY

“Writers, like most human beings, are adaptable creatures. They can learn to accept subordination without growing fond of it. No writer can forever stand in the wings and watch other people take the curtain calls while his own contributions get lost in the shuffle.”—Rod Serling

“The well is where your “juice” is. Nobody knows what it is made of, least of all yourself. What you know is if you have it, or you have to wait for it to come back.”—Ernest Hemingway

“I have no idea who the characters are, later, their personalities take over anything I might want to do. I end up writing not from my own will, but from theirs—they come alive as I write and make me do things that I couldn’t have planned.”—Akira Kurosawa

“There’s a powerful magic about being a writer that I still marvel at.”—Sidney Lumet

“As an artist, I feel that we must try many things — but above all we must dare to fail.”
—John Cassavetes

Paddy Chayefsky on cutting/editing:

If it should occur to you to cut, do so. That’s the first basic rule of cutting. If you’re reading through and stop, something is wrong. Cut it. If something bothers you, then it’s bad. Cut it. If you can cut inside the speech, you’re really cutting most effectively. It’s purifying, it’s refining. Making it precise. Precision is one of the basic elements of poetry. My own rules are very simple. First, cut out all the wisdom; then cut out all the adjectives. I’ve cut some of my favorite stuff. I have no compassion when it comes to cutting. No pity, no sympathy. Some of my dearest and most beloved bits of writing have gone with a very quick slash, slash, slash. Because something was heavy there. Cutting leads to economy, precision, and to a vastly improved script.